Black Ghost

7/10

7/10 I'm sure it means something, but I don't exactly get it. MM

6/10 I know it isn't a tower, but I still can't make out what it really is. Sorry. MM

To be a writer, you have to be at least proficient in grammar and spelling and all that technicalness. I mean, just because you write made-up stories doesn't mean you ...

Not sure it really works as a title, it seems like a thought, and not really profound enough to be a really catchy title. Maybe it's just mel. XD A ...

"In a carefully positioned house atop a cliff overlooking a cascading ocean of water lies a deep, dark and terrible secret that will no doubts tickle your fancy and will ...

7/10, I don't get the joke, but I'm sure it would be really funny if I did. XD MM

7/10

Sounds like a beautifully refreshing drama thing, I would definitely pick it up and give a look through. It sounds so subtly profound, so I would probably burst unless I ...

Hey, author13. :D Your pieces are always very interesting, and I like how you attempt to tackle drama in a refreshing way. But, there are still parts you can improve ...

Okay, it's not bad, really. It has the potential to be something quiet good, actually. The thing is I think it needs to be a bit longer. And you need ...

It was the funniest thing...you see, there was a new episode of Spongebob Squarepants today, in which Plankton attempted to steal the Krabby Patty formula by distracting Spongebob by asking ...

6/10, took me a few moments to realize what it was.

7/10, it's just a tower...

7/10, eh, it's okay.